Sunday, September 30, 2012


Phoebe Day
Mrs. Miller
Publishing Class
September 30, 12
Birthday
The most important date I will always remember is, 9/29/00.  My birthday was last Saturday. I was looking forward to this day for months and months. I was finally 12 years old. The age of everyone else in my grade. I woke up early and I felt older. I was with my friend and I was ready to take on the day right as my alarm went off.  We walked over to breakfast and I ate a big meal. While eating, many people complimented me by saying happy birthday. 
        Although most people stay up until they were born, I didn’t.  I couldn't stay up until 3:44 because I had had a party that night and I had so much sugar that I was so tired.  My friend and I went to bed at around 11:00 PM and we were fast asleep right as we jumped in our beds. The whole day was wonderful! 
         Right after breakfast, we went over to the turf and played FH for about 3 hours. We then waddled over to my mom’s office, very sore.  Right  after that, we went over to lunch where we, again, ate a big meal.  Time flew and it was already 1 o’clock. Mariah and I sprinted over to the turf to watch the varsity FH game to learn a thing or two.  It was a very fun time! She eventually left and I was left at the turf. Then my other friend popped out of know where and we hung out at the gym. I was at the gym until 5:30 PM. The night went by quickly after eating popcorn while watching a movie at my neighbor’s house. The day was AWESOME!!


3 comments:

  1. This is Phoebe. I know this is a very bad draft. I will post a better one tonight. It will be a lot better so dont make fun of this one!

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  2. Good start, excited for the edited version :) -Liz

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  3. I know you said this is a bad draft, but It isn't THAT bad. I think that when you say that your favorite time you remember is your birthday it doesn't really make sense. I mean, do you remember being born?

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