My best friend, Jenny Hayes, was kidnapped exactly one year ago at age thirteen. Jenny Hayes was taken at 1:11am by an unknown intruder as she was asleep. How do I know this? On her bedside table was an inscription:
1:11. Gone.
-unknown
Jenny was my best friend. Jenny meant everything to me. Jenny is gone.
And now, I stand here, waiting for the bus, wearing only some worn out jeans with holes, a windbreaker and old, fallen-apart Nikes, kicking stones across the cracked street on this frigid late-November morning-- the anniversary of my best friend's disappearance. Wiggling my toes to keep them from going numb, I sigh and am thankful that my mind is distracted by the frigid weather so as not to think about anything else too intently. But how can anything really distract me when only a year ago, Jenny and I were standing in this same spot, waiting for the bus to come and drive us to school. Our discussion is still burned into the back of my mind, although I barely even thought about it at the time.
"Hey, what's wrong?" Jenny asks.
I look at her in the corner of my eyes and her green eyes look back at me with great empathy.
"There's this kid," I hesitate, then continue, " He's a ninth grader who goes to our school, and yesterday, as I was walking to the bus he told me he would beat me up if I didn't give him some cigarettes tomorrow. Today is tomorrow, Jenny. I have no cigarettes." I talk quietly, trying not to make a HUGE deal out of things.
"No worries, my friend. I bet you could take down some ninth grader thug, any day."
A smirk forms on my lips.
Jenny always knew what to say.
More coming next week!!!
Lindsay--I love that opening line. What a way to grab your reader! Moving smoothly into flashbacks can be a difficult transition, but you pull it off here. It feels natural. There's one thing that catches me as I read this though. If Jenny was her best friend, why hasn't she shared the bullying incident with her? It doesn't feel consistent. If in fact you decide that she hasn't shared, I think her thoughts need to include why...shame? I'm curious. I can't wait to read why she disappeared! You have already built up the suspense with your opening!
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