I quicken my stride and hear my footsteps against
the linoleum, sharp and brisk. I come to the cafeteria and find it empty, except
for a redhead girl sitting at one of the tables alone, bent over a piece of paper
writing intently.
“Darn it,” I think. This is my first week at Holderness
Central School and I’ve missed lunch. I moved here a month earlier and enrolled
late, so have spent the past twenty minutes trying to get organized and find
the lunchroom. My stomach growls hungrily and I sigh. It was going to be a long
day. Startled, the girl turns around, her red hair flying and a blue pen
gripped in her right hand.
“Um, hi…” I venture. God. What a stupid thing to
say, couldn’t I have managed something more? How lame am I?
“Hi” she says, “I don’t think I’ve seen you before,
are you new?” she asks curiously
“Uh… yeah. I just enrolled last week; I’m in the 7th
grade. My name’s Jessie” I stand there awkwardly as she runs her eyes up and
down my petite, 4’ 11” frame, brown hair, and totally normal, boring outfit.
“Hey, that’s cool! There are two girls in the
eighth grade with me named Jessie! Well, Jessica really, but neither of them
like that name, so they go by Jessie. Geez, it’s gonna get pretty confusing
around here…, Do you need anything? You look sort of lost. I’m Elizabeth by the
way.” She seems genuine, not at all like the other girls who I met today, the
ones who were trying to brainwash me into joining their petty clique.
“Err, yeah. I am confus- I mean, yeah, I am lost. I
don’t know my way around, and now I missed lunch because I couldn’t find the
lunchroom.” Oh. My. God. Could I have screwed up any worse?
“Well, I don’t know how you feel about spaghetti,
but that was what was for lunch today, and I don’t like it, so you can it” she
motions for me to come sit down next to her and pushes her untouched lunch tray
to me. “It’s a little cold, but it should be better than nothing.” She clicks
her pen shut and tosses it down on top of a journal decorated with a cupcake
and some other random doodles.
“What were you writing?” I ask as I devour the
cold, congealed noodles, that actually weren’t half bad.
“Oh. Just a poem for my writing class. You can read
it if you want, but it still needs work” Elizabeth pushed the paper covered in
notes to me, “It’s this part right here,” I glance down at the paper and read.
Time slips between our fingers
Like water in cupped hands
Trying to stop it
Is like trying to stop the tide
And no matter how much you want to
No matter how much you pray
Children will grow up
The elderly will die
We will drown ourselves in pools of tears
Entire nations vanish
In the minute of a god
Yet time keeps pushing
On
The planets spin
The earth revolves
The stars trace
Their never ending passage across the sky
And time keeps pushing
On.
When I finish I am stunned “Wow,” I say “I mean,
wow, that’s really good, I love to write, but I can’t do anything that good!”
“You really think so?” Elizabeth searches my face
for any sign of falsehood. “I still think it needs work.” She suddenly glances
at the clock. “Crud, 11:50. Time for class.” She packs up her stuff in a hurry
and dashes out the pair of metal doors. I look down at the remains of my lunch,
and wonder if I have found a new friend.
This is a great beginning to your story. Are you planning on expanding it to a full story? If you are, I think this is a good start. I like the way you kind of show the relationship forming between the two. I also like the name ;) -Elizabeth
ReplyDeleteI dont think that I am going to continue with this, it was just an idea that I wanted to write about. And the name, actually, because my name is German, is the English translation of my name! :)
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I think that you should continue this actually. It would make for a great story. Having moved around to many different schools in my life, I can relate to all of the emotions your character has. I really like this story and I think you should definitely work on this more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Noa. Continuing this would turn out well! I think you are doing wonderful and I Like how you put a poem inside your other writing! Very unusual... I like it!
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Geeze guys! I really dont think I want to continue this and for one reason. I am out of ideas. When I came up with this, I didn't think about continuing it and so had no ideas that could make it keep going! If one of you wants though, I give you copyright permission to continute it :)
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