Dreams~
Unexpected.
The good and the bad.
The tears and the smiles.
Dreams are the place for your imagination to run free.
My place to make time go by.
My escape from reality
Drifting of on a cloud of cottony happiness.
High above everything.
Looking down
on everyone.
My dreams, about you.
*I know this isn't good but I had writers block about the whole time and I couldn't think. I could use any suggestions to make it better:) thanks!
I love the last three lines!!!! You should definitely expand on it but what you have so far is a great start. I also like "escape from reality". See what you can do with it. -Liz
ReplyDeleteI think this is a piece you can build off of. This, like Liz said, is a great start. I would like to know more about who you are dreaming about, what you see when you dream about them, maybe? This is a great poem to expand!
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I agree. I wish I could say more, but Liz and Lindsay basically sum up what I had to say already.
ReplyDeleteSometimes you have to just dump the words on paper--get out the "stink" and then work with it. The trick is to not let Writer's Block win.Your concept has potential to become something great!
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