Tuesday, February 19, 2013
Grease Lightning? Noa
He's as slick as an oil spill. Smooth like butter. As cool as ice. He moves with the swagger of a movie star, with enough confidence and charm to make the prettiest girls swoon. Silky smooth black hair smoothed back across his head. Lips curled in a taunting smirk, while his penetrating gaze is masked by this dark shades. His crisp leather jacket sits on his shoulders perfectly and compliments his faded jeans and white undershirt. A typical greaser, or bad body, or whatever you want to call it. Everything about him is fresh and pristine. Nothing can stop this juggernaut of cool and fashion. Except maybe an innocently placed root that just so happens to ensnare his foot as he walks by. The greaser tumble flat on the floor, his pitch black shades cracking, his smooth hair becoming tousled, and his leather jacket becoming stained with dirt. He quickly gets up and looks around quickly, making sure no one has seen his embarrassing fall, but of course we all had. A look of annoyance is smeared across his face as he quickly escapes the scene.
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The description of him was spot on! I think it was so precise and you used great vocabulary. I'm a little confused as to what the plot is...
ReplyDeleteI think this is really really funny. You are going on about this greaser, and how cool he is, and then he trips, and suddenly, he isn't cool anymore. AWESOME. Maybe you could expand this to make it a little bit longer, and maybe put a narrator in there somewhere, and add what he or she is thinking when he or she sees this greaser trip.
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