I am the voice in the dark,
calling out for your help.
The one you left behind
with tears in your eyes,
and a break in your heart
the one that you left
alone in the cold
alone in the dark
in a cage, all alone
without anyone to
love.
Without a family
To call my
own.
I wonder if she misses me.
I wonder if she calls
out for me
like I do
for you.
Calling out for you.
Calling out for the one
Who would lick away my tears
And snuggle with me
When everything was looking down
Calling out for the one
Who was mine
No matter what.
The day that I handed him away
With tears in my eyes
and a break in my heart
I wonder if he calls
Out for me
Like I do
For you
I really like these two poems, they go well together. I think you should make it so that the voices of the two are different so they don't so similar but besides that, great job! I think the first more but they're both good. -Liz
ReplyDeleteI like these poems, but, like Liz said, I think you should change them so they aren't much of the same. I know that they both miss the one they love, but I think you could add what happened between the two of them and why they are so afraid to speak to one another if they feel the same way.
ReplyDelete--Lindsay