(Beginning of) Chapter 2
The distant sound of jumbled conversations travels throughout the long vehicle. Only a few other kids are on the bus, besides me, and I am slightly disappointed because I was genuinely hoping the background noise would disrupt my negative thinking. Instead, though, I sit back and allow my thoughts to wander and drift wherever they please.
There were a lot of things I wasn't thinking about-- homework that I didn't do, forgetting to eat breakfast this morning. Those normal, everyday thoughts had no place in my mind today. It wasn't a regular day, although I wish it was.
As I sit up straighter in my seat, I realize one thing: there is no way I can even try to avoid my problems. I am going to have to face the facts and find a way to deal with my emotions. No matter how many mood swings wash over me today, I will be prepared. I will get through the day.
Chapter 2 will be continued.
This is my first draft of this, so please comment your suggestions-- they would be super helpful!
Is this a continuation of the piece you wrote last week? The character feels more consistent here than in the previous one. Is she anxious about the bully then? I like the line "There were a lot of things I wasn't thinking about--homework that I didn't do, forgetting to eat breakfst this morning..." but I'm anxious to know what she IS thinking about!
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